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Before . . .

This is to inform you that it is now company policy that all employess will learn and use respectful exchange skills. A 1 day conflict resolution workshop is scheduled October 4th, 9:00 - 17:00. for all employees. Attendance is a mandatory. If you have a valid reason for not attending please inform me ASAP. - James Commander

After . . .

I’ve been aware of growing tension at our weekly staff meetings during the past month. I feel some apprehension about this because I would like our team to be working together in a way that meets needs for collaboration, harmony and respect and I believe we are moving away from meeting those needs. After taking time to reflect on this and do some research, I have organized a 1 day conflict resolution workshop on October 4th. The intention is that this workshop will help us address painful issues in a supportive environment and give us some tools to communicate more effectively and develop trust. We will experience the best results if everyone is in attendance which will provide the opportunity for everyone’s needs and concerns to be included and addressed. I’m wondering if each of you would be willing to let me know if you’re willing to attend and if not, what might be getting in the way for you. - James Hart